KujiiTetsuiga's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mister Troper]

Alright. I assume (?) This is your first flash. You're learning... you're excited to submit content... You're just happy to be here!
This is of course great! I really like when people start off because it means they can look back on their work later and see how much they have improved. I'm guessing that even if this is your second submission: it is generally an earlier work.

So it's bad. For a variety of reasons it is -bad-. But this is fine because it shows promise, and you have ample room to improve. The animating was alright, (for stick figures) and the jokes had 'potential'. The issues come in the rather flat delivery, along with the rather varying types of joke.

The problems then come from how the flash loops indefinitely without being capable of being started or stopped by the viewer. Along with how every skit begins with the "Mistuh tropuh" thing that.... frankly is annoying and shouldn't have happened past the first time. You'd also be helped out by having a second person (anyone) to do one of your two characters voices.

I liked the previous flash submitted by you infinitely more.

steambeaver responds:

Thank you for taking the time to write that comment! I will definately try to incorporate, more ways to improve my animations, along with adding that start/stop button.

[The Reward]

Remember people, this is the type of thing our 5's should be being used for!

TalesofAlethrion responds:

Thanks buddy!

[A day in dead frontier 2]

Choose your own Adventure.

Choose your own adventure games are always fun (game? Movie? Bit of both)
I'd love to see part 3 be much larger, if you imagine each scene as a 'page' in a book, childrens books often have 80-120 page 'choose your own adventure' type books, and I could see you easily making one of these with a bit more effort.

Your animation is good enough, and unique enough (while at the same time being very crude and basic), so just writing more plot into a single game would work out great, and make a very entertaining project for others to watch, and be a part of.

Keep up the good work.

lordtac1 responds:

You seem like you know a good deal about these things, did it need more plot? Please PM me

[Madness Flageration V]

Your missing something.

I'm relatively sure the models of Madness Combat have a body, and feet, when you just have the head hopping around, it looks sorta weird to me.

DriftLV1 responds:

Lmao, I am just one lazy faggot, thanks for the review though, you speak the truth.