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The best, most memorable opening credits are those that do much in the shortest period of time. Such as the Armor Games opening credits.

TZK-Violater responds:

I do feel this is a bit long, I might scrap it for someting with more POW, this is pretty slow

Alright. I assume (?) This is your first flash. You're learning... you're excited to submit content... You're just happy to be here!
This is of course great! I really like when people start off because it means they can look back on their work later and see how much they have improved. I'm guessing that even if this is your second submission: it is generally an earlier work.

So it's bad. For a variety of reasons it is -bad-. But this is fine because it shows promise, and you have ample room to improve. The animating was alright, (for stick figures) and the jokes had 'potential'. The issues come in the rather flat delivery, along with the rather varying types of joke.

The problems then come from how the flash loops indefinitely without being capable of being started or stopped by the viewer. Along with how every skit begins with the "Mistuh tropuh" thing that.... frankly is annoying and shouldn't have happened past the first time. You'd also be helped out by having a second person (anyone) to do one of your two characters voices.

I liked the previous flash submitted by you infinitely more.

steambeaver responds:

Thank you for taking the time to write that comment! I will definately try to incorporate, more ways to improve my animations, along with adding that start/stop button.

Remember people, this is the type of thing our 5's should be being used for!

TalesofAlethrion responds:

Thanks buddy!

Choose your own Adventure.

Choose your own adventure games are always fun (game? Movie? Bit of both)
I'd love to see part 3 be much larger, if you imagine each scene as a 'page' in a book, childrens books often have 80-120 page 'choose your own adventure' type books, and I could see you easily making one of these with a bit more effort.

Your animation is good enough, and unique enough (while at the same time being very crude and basic), so just writing more plot into a single game would work out great, and make a very entertaining project for others to watch, and be a part of.

Keep up the good work.

lordtac1 responds:

You seem like you know a good deal about these things, did it need more plot? Please PM me

Your missing something.

I'm relatively sure the models of Madness Combat have a body, and feet, when you just have the head hopping around, it looks sorta weird to me.

DriftLV1 responds:

Lmao, I am just one lazy faggot, thanks for the review though, you speak the truth.

Not bad...in fact I like it.

I can't fathom exactly why. The animation is pretty low quality, however, it's unique, and I'm certain will get much better in time. (It's the fingers, the clothing is good, and the animations are not generally stiff, although in places it can be. I think 'slightly below average' would better describe your art)

Yet, even with this critique, I for some reason find myself enjoying it. The synch to the song is hilarious, and has me laughing, in an ironic way.

x-Spartaco-x responds:

hahahaha yeah. thank you very much, is my first animation.

this helps me a lot of criticism.

I'm working on the release of a couple puzzle-platforming titles, and tower defense style titles, before I move on to build a simple RPG, before building an even larger, special RPG. I hope to take you along with me for the journey!

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